Sunday, January 31, 2010

Beautiful World

This is Bryton's poem that she wrote for Reflections. I helped her find some describing words and get her sentences together a little bit. I helped her think of rhyming words but she came up with all the beautiful things to talk about. I guess maybe she got my artistic nature. She wants to win so bad. I hope she does!! One more thing this is her version of the words and how they are spelled. I have put the poem and real spelling of the words underneath it!



Butifl Wrld

Beauty is my famile siting down as wun.
Beauty is the poring rane making puddls just for fun.
Beauty is the sunlite beeting down on me.
Beauty is the ranebo shining brite for all to see.
Beauty is the sky abuv holding clowds so fluffy and lite.
Beauty is the singing brds flying through the nite.
Beauty is the mowntins with snow so wite and sure.
Beauty is the snowflakes falling down so pure.
Beauty is the puring cat, snuggling up to catch a nap.
Beauty is the soft pupy dog, chewing my new cap.
Beauty is the colorful flowers swaying in the breez.
Beauty is the crumbling leaves droping from the trees.
Beauty is the luv I giv!
Beauty is the wrld I liv!


By, Bryton Record
January 21, 2010




Beautiful World
Beauty is my family sitting down as one.
Beauty is the pouring rain making puddles just for fun.
Beauty is the sunlight beating down on me.
Beauty is the rainbow shining bright for all to see.
Beauty is the sky above holding clouds so fluffy and light.
Beauty is the singing birds flying through the night.
Beauty is the mountains with snow so white and sure.
Beauty is the snowflakes falling down so pure.
Beauty is the purring cat, snuggling up to catch a nap.
Beauty is the soft puppy dog, chewing my new cap.
Beauty is the colorful flowers swaying in the breeze.
Beauty is the crumbling leaves dropping from the trees.
Beauty is the love I give!
Beauty is the world I live!

By, Bryton Record
January 21, 2010